Edwin
11-January-2007
Seed fallen down,
Dead to the World
Planted in the Ground
In full Brightness you shine
No longer do you fight
'Though in your plantedness we mourn
We can look and have hope
News lives will be born.
We trust that you lived a sacrifice
Redeemed all your life
Now your reward, you realize
3 comments:
Stupendous!
Engaging start, some sorrow, and an ending we should all look forward to.
Pretty Deep. Why do you hold back.. Poems like these should be out there for everyone to read. What can i say you got talent and you just keeping it to yourself. hehehe. anyways...look forward to reading more.
Not everyone who reads this really understands it though... Sad. Put that is the risk I have to take.
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