Forget the last post. Here is a nicer piece about the people in my class that I wrote today:
The teacher is late, so I sit in the back of the class playing with the German made purple magic marker. I am doodling some pretty strange stuff that I will regret later on my notebook. The thin, acne marked face girl (henceforth gurl, because that is how I say it) waddles in. She never walks, but always waddles, swaying her hips as she slowly moves. She sat about three seats a head of me. She chats with Eddy, to direct right, as she roles ans twists and giggles. Then she spots Juan, who is sitting next to me at my left. Flashing a bright smile, she makes a flirty statement that basically means that she wants a mint sweet and knows that he has one to give her. Then she slides to seat in front of him and draws in closer to him. She laughs and rubs his arm and laughs again. He says something and she says something back and laughs again. Then the teacher comes into the classroom and we learn about special needs students in the regular classroom. I wish I didn't have to put up my purple marker....
(I am trying a new writing style.... does it fit me?)
4 comments:
your writing is very intresting beth i liked it because you are writing the truth, and i like people who talk the truth.But what about the others in class, there many other ladies i would like to hear baout in the classes that i don't take. well beth i like you writing once more keep up the good critical writing, and continue critisizing, becuase i like it.
HMmnn... anonymous seems interested in the other peeps. NO worry bethy you're doing good.... keep on writing!
Anonymous just knows who i am talking about, and wants to hear more to laugh.
I that wasn't my most loving piece ever written....
good work keep on writing seems nice but tell me who is this girl tell me at dwainwagner@yahoo.com ok thanks
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